Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:53 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
Are their any plans to continue this great story? I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I am working on the next installment, which will be (at least) fifth year and part of sixth, if not all of sixth year. I am hesitant to include any of seventh, as (like JKR) I plan the "final" encounter to be integral to seventh year, meaning at least two more fics, but with school winding down (I graduate in December of this year), fanfic is on a back burner when it comes to a choice between school and this. I'm sorry for the delay, but after graduation, I will be able to work more on this part of my life.
Date: 08 Oct 2009 9:50 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
I read PS last night and GOF Re-lit this morning. Do you have an ETA on the next one in the series?
I love the master/sub most so far in the series but I keep expecting Colin Creevey to at least try to get hin. *Grin*
Author's Response: Sadly, the muse for this took a vacation just after GOFR was written, but I've been working on ideas, some of which include "glossing over" the school year for (at least) fifth year, and maybe even (part of, of all of) sixth, but I'm not sure. Just keep an eye out, and you can mark authors as "favorites" which will alert you to updates on stories as well as new fics. As for the master/sub aspect, you may want to check out NebKreb (I'll see if I can find a link, shoot me an e-mail "firstname.lastname@example.org" so I can send it to you), and his fic "Domination", which is where I got the idea.
Date: 19 Jul 2009 13:21 Title: Philospher's Stone Revisited
There are quite a few inconsistencies in this chapter (and the last one as well) in the beginning of the last chapter, you mentioned about Mrs. Norris bing found and the message ... then why did the same thing happen after the Halloween ball?
Also, Creevy gets petrified twice in this chapter once after the match with Slytherin adn the second time after the duel with Malfoy and his subsequent expulsion ...
Date: 31 Dec 2008 9:17 Title: Philospher's Stone Revisited
I liked the way you did this, but you seem to change Hermione's age part way though.
At one point Percy & Dora talk about her, which makes it seem take she is in Percy's year, or maybe Dora's.
Then you refer to her as a secound year with Harry.
It would seem you are get a little mixed up.
But the over story line seems very good.
Keep up the good work.
Looking forward to reading the rest in this line.
Author's Response: What chapter did I refer to her in as a second year with Harry? She is supposed to be in Percy's (and Dora's) year, as Dora is only three years older than Harry in this story, and therefore in Percy's year.
Date: 31 Dec 2008 9:07 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
I have enjoyed this story, and can't wait to see where the next one takes us.
If you have already writen it please let know the name so we can read it.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I'm kind of stumped on the next in this series, I am also unsure if it will be the final, or just up to the end of seventh year, then a fourth for "after", but as it stands, I'm not sure where to go. With the toad gone, I have to find a new villain (not sure if it's DADA prof or not), and I don't want to just "re-write canon", so I'm working on other projects until the bug bites me again for the fifth year story.
Date: 01 Nov 2008 18:43 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
Hi I've read your stories not all of them but most of them that meet my liking and i don't want to be rude or insulting or anything negative but teeling you my opinion in hope that i can at least help you even in the least .I've been reading fanfiction stories for some time now and have read plenty of them ( all of them harry potter of course ) and i've notice that all of your stories are too sudent in developing a storie what i mean is that clues,situations.abbilities have been springing up nearly from nowhere most of the the story doesn't give any sign of evolution and of trasition from one situation to another the lemon scenes are like .....well imagine a scene you want lemonof course and imagine seeing it in fast forward what you're left with at the end is with an empty feeling saying "ok that was even faster than a quiky should be" if you get my meaning and another thing is the emotion as described in the stories are like "cut to standard sizes" or "one size only" i mean harry is dealing with danger here so there should be some intensity even just a samplee of it or when harry is havinf sex with his withec i mean come on he's suupposed to have breathtakingly gorgeus girls writhing under his ministrtions give us some heat.
Another thing i've noticed is that there are some gaps in you plot minor details but they're there so ......
And after those "warm" an "kind" words i only want to add that i am a fan of stories where harry has a lot talents but withes as well and when you have one man and a lot of women only one naughty things can happen and the stories that you have written are of my liking but also have potential of being greater so why not make them if you can as you can see i am one of those guys that fly of the handle and start screaming praises but i give credit where credit is due
if i have offended in any way sorry i didn't mean it i was only trying to give some help by eexpressing my opinion if you want to say anything mail me at
You're criticism is the kind I actually LIKE to receive, CONSTRUCTIVE! Sadly, the stories to date have been written faster than they should have been. I don't have an "official" beta, but I do have people who I will (and have in the past) rely on to proof the stories. From here out, sadly, this means that the updates will be slower than if I just did this one thing, as RL is getting busy (building a house, sub teaching, going to school for a 17 hour semester, and on and on and on), but I am using this to prepare myself to write my own novel, and as you can see from "The Next Chapter" to my current works in progress, I am growing, but as you know, growth is a long process, but worth it. After all, it's not the destination, it's the journey, right? Thanks for reading, and for your review.
Date: 16 Oct 2008 8:08 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
fun stuff, but, I do wonder, how did Karkakof get past the wards? Not to mention who ever put Harry's name in the Goblet. Because, you made a point in the prior story about nobody with the dark mark, no matter how they were disguised could enter Hogwarts.
Looking forward to more
Date: 15 Oct 2008 22:14 Title: Philospher's Stone Revisited
interesting re-do story, but I have to wonder, what purpose did changing the ages of Tonks and Hermione serve?
Author's Response: aside from the fact that Hermione always seemed like an "outsider" with Ron and Harry, and I like the "honks" plots, not much.
Date: 18 May 2008 18:46 Title: Goblet of Fire - Re-Lit
Really enjoy all your writing and this story esspecailly but you need to find a beta, there are plenty of flow, and story conflicts that would be an easy fix and help the story. Keep up the good work, anyhow, and am enjoying your site