Date: 28 Mar 2009 10:24 Title: Chapter 1
Okay, that was a completely unexpected ending. Hyper-speed is obviously a power with several unexpected (and unwelcome) side-effects.
A nice idea, though. A spell so dangerous that it could ultimately kill its target. Of course, the alternative wasn't particularly good so I can see why Harry agreed to it (his well known self-esteem issues aside).
Both a unique approach to the superhero!Harry concept and proof that you can find funnies anywhere with effort. Well done!
Author's Response: - I wish I could claim credit for the punch line, but I lifted it from a Fred Hembeck riff on the Flash circa 1978...