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Reviewer: Raethor Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:27 Title: Chapter 15

To be honest you shouldn't have posted this chapter. The story would have been better if you had just ended it with Goldstone's birth.

This chapter is at odds with the rest of the story. You fixed all the issues, and you should have left them fixed. Or you should have had them slowly fall apart over the entire story, not between two chapters.

At the end of the last chapter, Amelia was the Minister and was making changes to the Ministry, Dumbledore was dead, Voldemort was dead, Harry owned the Prophet, things were changing for the better.

Threre was no indication that things were getting worse, and it makes no sense for them to have gotten that bad. 

Reviewer: Raethor Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 23:30 Title: Chapter 14

That was rather boring, no build up, no action. Just all of a sudden 'Voldemort is a part if your House, cast him out and he'll die.'

Reviewer: Raethor Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2015 23:18 Title: Chapter 11

You do know that Snape is in the right here? He watched Harry, who is leagaly an adult, murder Dumbledore. And it was murder, Harry threw the first spell, and stated outright that he planend on attacking a defenseless person. 

Snape tried to leave, but was unable to do so for some reason, he realzied that Harry had his wand and asked for it to be returned, Harry refused, so Snape tried to get it back from the muderer.  

Then Sunan comes in and attacks a defenseless man... 

Reviewer: Raethor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:11 Title: Chapter 5

<“What grades did he receive?” asked Molly. She was concerned about what she was hearing. Harry and his fortune belonged to her daughter and no one else! Not even a dead girl!>

 How do these thoughts even go together? Harry took his N.E.W.T.s,  that has nothing to do with Harry or his fortune going to anyone else. And who is the 'dead girl'? She doesn't know about Hermione yet, and even if she did she would assume Hermione was with Ron.

Reviewer: Raethor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:05 Title: Chapter 4

How are there laptops in 1995?

How is Harry so quick to learn everything? He only took Hemione's knowledge, not her brain. And even she wasn't that smart. 

When did Snape attack Harry's mind?

 

Reviewer: Prongs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 14:37 Title: Chapter 3

Just one note, it's Reconaissance, not Recongizance, but that's a minor thing, great story so far.

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Date: 17 May 2012 16:06 Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter

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Date: 17 May 2012 16:05 Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter

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Date: 17 May 2012 16:05 Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter

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Date: 17 May 2012 16:04 Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter

Reviewer: Alberic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 23:14 Title: Chapter 11

I thought Draco was Lord Black, how did Harry get the title?

Reviewer: Alberic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 21:33 Title: Chapter 6

I thought wormtail was caught and questioned. Why isn't Lucius in jail, or the others, for that matter? Did something happen, or did you forget to include wormtail escaping/being freed and Lucius' bribing Fudge to stay out of jail?

Reviewer: thekev Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2010 3:06 Title: Chapter 10

Another great chapter!!! Hope to see more soon.

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:14 Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter again, I just hope that Harry don't all of a sudden become a wus like in cannon

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Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:12 Title: Chapter 8

GREAT CHAPTER!!!

Reviewer: Eewec Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2010 10:13 Title: Chapter 7

Thoroughly enjoy your characterisations and plot so far.

You've managed to avoid some of the more irritating cliches without ignoring their possibilities.

Nicely done.

Reviewer: thekev Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 17:05 Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter I loved the weasel slam you sneaked in near the end. Keep up the good work

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Date: 01 Mar 2010 15:56 Title: Chapter 6

Great freaking chapter, Just wish you had added the spanking of Bella to the end before stopping. Hope to see more of it soon.

Reviewer: jazed Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 0:34 Title: Chapter 6

LOL Funny. Thank you for the update. Love this story. I like your work in genral.( havent read all of it yot, but like all i have read so far. Keep up the good work.)

:)

Reviewer: brigrove Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 23:30 Title: Chapter 5

Great story so far even if you did kill off Hermione!

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:05 Title: Chapter 5

This was in my opinion the best chapter yet. I hope to see Dumbles get his along with the weasels and Snape, not to mention Tommy boy and his butt buddies.

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:04 Title: Chapter 4

Love it please keep it going strong

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:03 Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:03 Title: Chapter 2

Keep up the good work

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 9:02 Title: Chapter 1

great start

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