Date: 26 Jun 2011 21:29 Title: Prologue: Dark Beginnings (Reworked)
I have 'read' 110 stories so far. This one is by far the best! This is also the only one I read ALL of. It's AMAZING. Great job. Maybe use more proper language. It doesn't bother me, but the sex-enuendos could be much for scientific. Just a thought.
Happy you like it, just updated now...