Date: 25 Oct 2008 6:37 Title: Terminus
A great ending to a fine story. I'll review fully on FicWad as that is where I've been following this story from the start. I just want to thank you for your time and effort and work.
I think that you have created a very intellligent, realistic and thought-provoking alternate ending to this story. I particularly approve of your avoiding 'fairy tale' clichés and making all the characters human and falible.
Author's Response: - I try to write what sounds (to me) as realistic as possible within the framework of the basic story. People seem to like it. Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 23 Oct 2008 19:28 Title: Sharing Experience
Well its a great story so far i have to admit to you that i skip your parts with Ron and Hermione the thought of those two make me sick so its nothing to do with you I just cant stand Ron the thought of Hermione with him is like her with Draco, Snape or Riddle Oh Heck no. So keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm almost done with the last chapter.
Date: 22 Aug 2008 8:26 Title: Changes
I really hope you update soon. This story is pretty good and I'm curious as to where it's going next...Good job on it and I hope to see a new chapter soon.
Author's Response: - oops. I'm a little behind in my uploading chapters to this site. I've just put two new chapters up.
Date: 25 May 2008 8:36 Title: Changes
Very interesting chapter! Cant wait to see what happens with Harry and Daphne, Im sure she was made to write that or someone else wrote that for her.
Author's Response: Like many young women in cultures like that of Wizarding Britain, Daphne has found herself stuck between love and duty...