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Reviewer: huskerfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2008 23:21 Title: Chapter 5

Great story so far, can't wait to read the next chapter and see how Harry reacts. Update soon!!!

Reviewer: blackruby Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2008 20:07 Title: Chapter 5

Love it and the fact that Harry hasn't a clue what he did.  I don't usually like first person stories but this one is great for one.

Reviewer: gothiclc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2008 9:32 Title: Chapter 5

I like this story.

I hope the next chapter is as  great as the last ones.

Reviewer: kalemoth Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2008 2:56 Title: Chapter 5

I have read the first 5 chapters of this story, and it's very good though it can get confusing with the first person viewpoint, especially at scene changes, is there a reason that you are avoiding a third-person viewpoint?

In my opinion first-person viewpoints can add a lot more than necessary to a story, and especially with the constant switching to show the others thoughts and feelings on each point in the story can make the reader feel confused, I was to a degree.



Author's Response: THis is more of an extended exercise in writing in first person perspective and in how to think of similar scenes from multiple viewpoints, than a thought out and planned story line.

Reviewer: Kaylee52107 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2008 11:53 Title: Chapter 5

I would love to see what you write next.  Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

 

Thank you,

Terri

Reviewer: Kaylee52107 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2008 6:17 Title: Chapter 4

I would love to see what you write next.  Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

 

Thank you,

Terri

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