Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:39 Title: Clan Potter Begins
Hey great story and all....in fact I think I've read this somewhere else before but anyway I just wanted to point out something you seemed to have forgotten....what about Hermione life debt to Harry!?! you know the trol incident in first year....as far as I know she never paid him back or he has never told her to forget it???? so wouldnt that mean he has two slaves instead of one?????
Date: 04 Jul 2010 21:04 Title: Epilogue: The Letter
Excellent story! So, Hermione was a Werewolf's (NOT Remus) daughter, but who was Amy? I assume the Werewolf was a magic user, and so was Amy. That would make Hermione either Half-blood, like Harry or a Pureblood. It was a fun read, and I enjoyed the story very much. Thanks for writing it, and please continue with your writing. You are a great storyteller.
Author's Response: Much like characters such as Marcus Belby, Peakes and Sloper, Amy was not an integral part of the story. As Remus was the one who told James about Hermione being born to his friend and Amy, they were merely her parents. The other point, which I may add later to the chapter where Harry reads the letter, is that Lycanthropy is a magical virus. I've been toying with the idea that if a muggle is bitten, they do not gain the ability to use magic, but can produce magical children. Also, I may include that Amy was a witch, or a squib (more likely) meaning that born to two beings who have magic (even if they can't use it) the gene wouldn't be recessive. Alas though, this was mostly just a way to tie the two together in some way beyond their time at Hogwarts and their marriage. I'll make sure to put up a note if I edit the story though.
Date: 05 Sep 2009 0:59 Title: Clan Potter Begins
Harry loves fangirl Ginny? Ginny, who in canon has had nothing to do with Harry except for a very few weeks a summer in the years after her rescue? Ginny, who again by canon, has little to do with Harry at Hogwarts - Hell, Luna Lovegood had more interaction with Harry in her and Ginny's tyeart than Ginny did....So, just when and how did these two find the time and opportunity to talk to each other, much less fall madly in love with one another?
Hermione is believable for love; ditto Susan, Tracey, Hannah, Hell even Pansy for that matter, but Ginny...only in a hack writer's fevered dream -oops, that's where it came from originally.
Date: 21 Jun 2008 0:14 Title: A Dark Day
Gabby? At least you went with Veela maturing earlier than full humans.
Is Fleur still a slave? Is she back with Bill? Didn't she her lesson about Weasleys and their tempers?
Author's Response: Read the rest of the story, trust me.