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Reviewer: jabarber69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2015 4:39 Title: Clan Potter Begins

Hey great story and all....in fact I think I've read this somewhere else before but anyway I just wanted to point out something you seemed to have forgotten....what about Hermione life debt to Harry!?! you know the trol incident in first year....as far as I know she never paid him back or he has never told her to forget it???? so wouldnt that mean he has two slaves instead of one?????

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Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:50 Title: Epilogue: The Letter

I enjoyed your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.

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Date: 04 Jul 2010 21:04 Title: Epilogue: The Letter

Excellent story!  So, Hermione was a Werewolf's (NOT Remus) daughter, but who was Amy? I assume the Werewolf was a magic user, and so was Amy.  That would make Hermione either Half-blood, like Harry or a Pureblood. It was a fun read, and I enjoyed the story very much.  Thanks for writing it, and please continue with your writing.  You are a great storyteller.

 

KUTGW,

 

Noreen 



Author's Response: Much like characters such as Marcus Belby, Peakes and Sloper, Amy was not an integral part of the story.  As Remus was the one who told James about Hermione being born to his friend and Amy, they were merely her parents.  The other point, which I may add later to the chapter where Harry reads the letter, is that Lycanthropy is a magical virus.  I've been toying with the idea that if a muggle is bitten, they do not gain the ability to use magic, but can produce magical children.  Also, I may include that Amy was a witch, or a squib (more likely) meaning that born to two beings who have magic (even if they can't use it) the gene wouldn't be recessive.  Alas though, this was mostly just a way to tie the two together in some way beyond their time at Hogwarts and their marriage.  I'll make sure to put up a note if I edit the story though.

Reviewer: trongod Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2009 0:59 Title: Clan Potter Begins

Harry loves fangirl Ginny? Ginny, who in canon has had nothing to do with Harry except for a very few weeks a summer in the years after her rescue? Ginny, who again by canon, has little to do with Harry at Hogwarts - Hell, Luna Lovegood had more interaction with Harry in her and Ginny's tyeart than Ginny did....So, just when and how did these two find the time and opportunity to talk to each other, much less fall madly in love with one another?

 Hermione is believable for love; ditto Susan, Tracey, Hannah, Hell even Pansy for that matter, but Ginny...only in a hack writer's fevered dream -oops, that's where it came from originally.

Reviewer: PGHammer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2008 16:13 Title: Clan Potter Begins

And we get a glimpse (actually two) of Angry!Harry (first at Bill and Pansy in Gringott's, then at Moody); this is one of the few times I can remember Harry *spanking* Moody in front of Amelia Bones, though.

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Date: 01 Sep 2008 13:08 Title: Clan Potter Begins

This seems alot like the Herritage! I hope it's going to be different!

Reviewer: blackruby Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2008 11:57 Title: Epilogue: The Letter

Love the way the story went

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Date: 01 Jul 2008 13:30 Title: Epilogue: The Letter

Great story!

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Date: 27 Jun 2008 22:20 Title: Epilogue: The Letter

ahhh.... it ended too soon!  more more more!! Write another one, please....

Author's Response: This series is over, but there are stories "in the works", so just peruse the list, if you want to.

Reviewer: noylj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2008 0:14 Title: A Dark Day

Gabby? At least you went with Veela maturing earlier than full humans.

Is Fleur still a slave? Is she back with Bill? Didn't she her lesson about Weasleys and their tempers? 



Author's Response: Read the rest of the story, trust me.

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