Date: 11 Apr 2009 22:46 Title: Chapter 1
Why have Ginny not say anything to anyone? What about a funeral for Potter? Wouldn't she want to be there or wonder why there wasn't one? What about the News Papers? Wouldn't they be BLARING about the Boy Who Lived struggling for life? What about Kreacher? Wouldn't he know his master is not dead? Why would Malfoy care to search for Ginny but then not tell her anything? Wasn't Kreacher supposed to look after her? There were too many holes in this story - I did find myself enjoying parts of it and the premise was good you are obviously a talented writer, If you need a beta to help you out by pointing things out to you - I'd be happy to.