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Reviewer: noreenklose Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 23:56 Title: Calm waters ahead

Good story.  Thanks for writing it.  I enjoyed this one very much, but I did have one point that felt "wrong".  When Draco attacked Ginny and Harry, Harry made him a nameless Squib with no money or home, and had him sent to Azkaban.  Narcissa didn't "kick up a fuss", not even a voice raised in anger?  That was the ONLY unrealistic scene in this story.  MOST mothers would have had some kind of meltdown!  Even if it was just crying uncontrollably in her room.

 

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