Date: 09 Jun 2008 1:29 Title: Chapter 3:The secret, and Hogwarts
Great chapter mate, I love how the story is going and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work.
I love Harry's shaft (though I think that meant to be spelt differently) I like that Harry can over come Dumbldore's compulsion charm.
I found a mistake here, but still had on effect on him - the first on here meant to be no.
PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: I think that you meant Harry's staff,*chuckle well you'll be pleasantly surprised at what will happen next I hope.*winks
Date: 08 Jun 2008 10:22 Title: Chapter 2: The Choice, the Revenge and Magic
Like this new chapter, better then the old one mate. Oh the ass Dumbledore, planing all that to Harry, at least it didn't work out for him.
Can't wait for the next chapter, so how old is Harry?? PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: He was seven when he accepted the offer