Date: 13 Jun 2008 7:11 Title: Chapter 4:Introduction to Necromancy
First off, MAKE THE CHAPTERS LONGER, now that is out of the way :P not a bad chapter, even if it is SHORT. Seeing this IS a NC17 why have you added the (censored)(bleep!!!)( Oh boy is this censored)?
Oh I love that Lucius Malfoy was the person that Harry was going to sacrifice - lol - nice mate. I also like the duel, that the winner gets the other person's property, funds and titles, nice.
Oh I think you should sort out the bord at the end of the story.
PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: Its hard to make swear words so I just use the readers imagination on that. Besides Its for the greater good.... Hehehe thanks for reviewing by the way